Your storytelling was very descriptive and there were some fun paths to take. I think you could've incorporated more colored text if the stalker/killer was speaking so you know that he's a threat.
I really enjoyed the revelation of the truth at the end of the game! The truth part caught me off guard. The process of counting to 7 was also fascinating. I think the highlight for me was your descriptive writing, which allowed me to quickly immerse myself in the corresponding plot and environment. Regarding player choices, I could clearly understand the potential consequences of each choice, which I think is a great aspect. If there's anything to add, I suggest fleshing out the background story of the player character to provide clues for players to speculate on who might be chasing them while they're on the run.
I really enjoyed your game. I thought that the story was fascinating and very engaging on its own. My favorite part of the game was how you made the option appear after you were able to click to number 7. It was one I wanted to incorporate in my game but I didn't know how. I think one thing that you can add is a passage back to the beginning of the story if you get the option that ends up in your death. Overall, I really like this game good job. -Gareth Correa
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I like the part where I had to do math.
Your storytelling was very descriptive and there were some fun paths to take. I think you could've incorporated more colored text if the stalker/killer was speaking so you know that he's a threat.
I really enjoyed the revelation of the truth at the end of the game! The truth part caught me off guard. The process of counting to 7 was also fascinating. I think the highlight for me was your descriptive writing, which allowed me to quickly immerse myself in the corresponding plot and environment. Regarding player choices, I could clearly understand the potential consequences of each choice, which I think is a great aspect. If there's anything to add, I suggest fleshing out the background story of the player character to provide clues for players to speculate on who might be chasing them while they're on the run.
I really enjoyed your game. I thought that the story was fascinating and very engaging on its own. My favorite part of the game was how you made the option appear after you were able to click to number 7. It was one I wanted to incorporate in my game but I didn't know how. I think one thing that you can add is a passage back to the beginning of the story if you get the option that ends up in your death. Overall, I really like this game good job. -Gareth Correa